This photo really captures the girl, in the moment. I just love the way you allowed light to be involved in the picture. It makes it look nice.(Even a night sky would have managed to pull this off.) Wait, did I say that right?Allow me to look at the artwork again, so I can input further comment. Ah yes, this photo tells a story.(It is, a photograph, right?) Anyway, it's as if we caught her in a private moment, and she is trying to tell us something, or at the very least, portray it. All we have to do is dive deep.
I like the subject and composition of the photo, but the blur is kinda killing it for me. Seeing how high the shutter speed was, I don't think it would have hurt to bump up the aperture to get a bit more in focus. Even with that though it seems like some artificial blur was added in post. Could just be the really low aperture making it seem like that, but still the blur does subtract from the overall piece especially around the subjects face.